Book Review: Roddy Doyle’s The Commitments


One of the finest compliments I can pay a book is to say that, while turning the pages, I sometimes forget I’m reading a book. Another excellent comment I can make on a novel is that I managed to read it in one sitting. Both of these statements, I’m happy to say, are true of Roddy Doyle’s The Commitments. Not to give the impression that I forced myself to finish it, mind you. Honestly, I didn’t want to stop until I was done.

When I started this book, though, I knew I was going to have a slight problem. The film version of The Commitments is not only a fine movie, but it’s also one of my favorites. Seriously. It’s in my top ten. So the issue I was going to need to work through was two-fold: I had to avoid comparing the book to the movie, and I was going to have to try and “see” Doyle’s characters as he wrote them, not as their on-screen counterparts. It was difficult at first, but then Doyle’s words worked their magic on me.

Have you got soul? If so, The World’s Hardest Working Band is looking for you. Contact J. Rabbitte, 118, Chestnut Ave., Dublin 21. Rednecks and southsiders need not apply.

With this article sent into the Hot Press classifieds, Dubliner Jimmy Rabbitte, an aspiring music manager and entrepreneur, sets out, along with two of his buddies, bass player Derek and guitarist Outspan, to form a new band, The Commitments, the Saviors of Soul, The Hardest Working Band in the World. Fed up with the popularity of new wave music, Jimmy wants to provide the people of Dublin with something authentic. “All tha’ mushy shite abou’ love an’ fields an’ meetin’ mots in supermarkets and McDonald’s is gone,” he tells Derek and Outspan, “ou’ the fuckin’ window. It’s dishonest…it’s bourgeois.”

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Fixing that musical problem is exactly what Jimmy intends to do. Through a combination of auditions and word of mouth, the band quickly takes shape, adding Deco, a volatile, egotistical, and polarizing singer who will prove to be Jimmy’s toughest managerial challenge, James, a keyboardist, Billy, a drummer, Dean, a budding sax man, and The Commitmentettes, Natalie, Imelda, and Bernie.

But the most fascinating member of the band has to be Joey The Lips Fagan, an experienced horn player who answers Jimmy’s newspaper ad. Not only has Joey apparently played with everyone in the music business–he’s also the God-ordained missionary of soul. At their first meeting, he tells Jimmy:

–The Lord told me to come home. Ed Winchell, a Baptist reverend on Lenox Avenue in Harlem, told me. But the Lord told him to tell me. He said he was watching something on TV about the feuding Brothers in Northern Ireland and the Lord told Reverend Ed that the Irish Brothers had no soul, that they needed some soul. And pretty fucking quick! Ed told me to get back to Ireland and blow some soul into the Irish Brothers. The Brothers wouldn’t be shooting the asses off each other if they had soul. So said Ed.  

Still, the point of this novel is not whether The Commitments fulfill their mission, or whether they make it big or not. They can make it, certainly. They’re good enough, and people love them. They have chemistry, talent, and desire. They have Joey, whose years of experience playing soul gives them credibility and wisdom. They have Mickah, a tough, loyal bouncer who also serves as a surrogate drummer. And they have Jimmy, which is undoubtedly the best thing they could hope for.

The journey is what drives this story, and Doyle devotes a decent amount of space to detailing that process, showing the musicians learning their instruments and parts, with Joey The Lips serving as a guide. In the space of a relatively small novel–The Commitments weighs in at one-hundred-sixty-five pages–Doyle pulls off an enormous amount of story. By the time you finish this one, you feel like you’ve lived with these folk–really lived. It’s also worth mentioning, by the way, that this was Doyle’s first novel.

A good story isn’t all this novel has in its favor, though. One of the most remarkable elements here is Doyle’s use of language, particularly in passages of fast-paced, authentic, and incredibly funny dialogue. While some may be wary of the Irish dialect, it’s no time at all before the reader becomes engrossed enough to forget. And it’s not so difficult as to require a glossary like Irvine Welsh’s Trainspotting. Plus, the dialect is also a large part of why the dialogue works so well.

Also, there’s surprisingly little expository detail in this story. Instead, Doyle charges ahead, letting the reader in on the characters’ backstories and key physical attributes through dialogue and character actions. For instance, from the first time we meet him, we know Joey Fagan is older and bald, but as for his other traits, we find them out when Doyle wants us to know. We discover Joey is fat and rundown looking, for instance, from the other members’ incredulous reactions when he becomes involved with all three of The Commitmentettes, in succession.

In the wrong hands, this kind of writing can be tedious and even come off as self-conscious and amateurish. Think, for instance, of characters in novels describing each other–or even worse, themselves–in awkward dialogue. But Doyle handles it with style, wit, and grace. The action, and more importantly the dialogue–which is actually most of the action of this story–happens so quickly that we only take cursory notice of how it’s being delivered.

Take this snappy exchange between Jimmy and Joey The Lips Fagan, also at their first meeting:

–What’s your name, pal?
–Joseph Fagan, said the man.
He was bald, too, now that he’d taken his helmet off.
–Joey The Lips Fagan, he said.
–Eh. ——Come again?
–Joey The Lips Fagan.
–An’ I’m Jimmy The Bollix Rabbitte.
–I earned my name for my horn playing, Brother Rabbitte. How did you earn yours?
Jimmy pointed a finger at him.
-Don’t get snotty with me, son.

Elsewhere in the book, the scarcity of dialogue attributions helps to create a convincing impression of simultaneous, overlapping, and disorienting conversations taking place within a group of people who don’t care much for each other. Insults are thrown, often accompanied by punches, and many times it doesn’t matter who is giving or receiving.

One of the most common statements I’ve read about The Commitments is that it’s a good novel for musicians to read, and I agree. I can’t read it as someone who’s not a musician, since I’ve been one for three-quarters of my life. But I suspect this one is also just as relevant to the non-musician. In the end, The Commitments isn’t a story about a hardworking band that scrabbles its way to the top of the charts. It’s a story about a moment in time, a moment many of us can understand or perhaps merely wish we could, in which there is absolutely no doubt that success is looming. Whether or not it will actually happen is irrelevant.

Throughout my reading of this book, I was often reminded of Marty Dibergi, the fictional documentarian of This is Spinal Tap, who said “I wanted to capture the… the sights, the sounds… the smells of a hard-working rock band, on the road.” With The Commitments, Roddy Doyle has done precisely that.

Oh, and if there’s a Roddy Doyle fan club out there, sign me up.

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